Under the hill

2.7.10

Cutlery

dreaming
of finger
tips

gentlescratchyhair

s l ow l y

s l o w l y
faster

sighs and murmurs
q...uivers
and shakes

    b     l
            i
      i     tt
          l
     g  e

spoon

I quite like the look of this one, with the fun layout.

2 Comments:

  • Mab, I found your blog through Andrea's and am glad I did. I don't normally like shape poetry or other visually experimental writing. It does funny things to my brain.

    But this one is brilliant. It seems so appropriate and completely coherent. I love it. Well done.

    By Blogger C. N. Nevets, at 5:49 AM  

  • Thank you very much :)

    By Blogger Mab, at 7:28 PM  

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